Sunday, February 5, 2012

Unbiased sobs- Final edit

        Initial-
Screams of newborns mimic cries of mourners.
Sobs follow life just as they follow death.
Creators differ, but fate both accepts.
Reception of reality anchors
The unstable ‘til waves of a fire
Burn assurances. Ashes are then swept
Into the eyes of the renewed well-kept.
Cowardly waterworks cling to corners.
Many grim events are products of life
but blessings occur  as well. Dead-weight
tends to productively create a rife
of weeps, each tear shed teaches and creates
tough skin, strong-willed hearts, and disciplined strife’s.
Beautiful tears; they don’t discriminate

        Final-
Beautiful tears; they don’t
discriminate.
Screams of newborns mimic cries of 
mourners.
Sobs follow life just as they follow
death.
Creators differ, but fate both accepts.
Beautiful tears; they don’t
discriminate.
Reception of reality anchors The unstable ‘til waves of a
fire
Burn assurances. Ashes are then
swept
Into the eyes of the renewed well-kept.
Cowardly waterworks cling to
corners.
Many grim events are products of
life
but blessings occur  as well.
Beautiful tears; they don’t
discriminate.
Dead-weight
tends to productively create a rife
of weeps, each tear shed teaches and
creates
tough skin, strong-willed hearts, and disciplined
strife’s.
Beautiful tears; they don’t
discriminate.

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